THË MAN IN THE QUEUE

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HELLO THERE, I'M BACK WITH A STORY WHICH IS KIND OF ACT. I'VE WRITTEN ALL THE SAYING OF CHARACTERS AND THE SCENES . ITS THE READER RESPONSIBILITY TO CREATE A HYPOTHETICAL SCENARIO IN HIS/HER MIND. THIS WOULD HELP YOU TO UNDERSTAND THIS STORY SO OPEN YOUR MIND AND READ THIS.

                                   



                         (IN THE MALL)
A SMALL GIRL:- MAY I'VE HAVE THIS?
HER GRANDMA:- HMMMMM..NO...
HER GRANDPA:- WHY DONT YOU GET SOMETHING SPECIAL FOR GRANDPA?

 NARRATOR:- "SMALL GIRL SHAKES HER HEAD"
"SHE PEEKS TO A CAKE COUNTER AND DEMANDED A PREMIUM TRUFFLE CAKE".
 NARRATOR:- "SUDDENLY HER GRANDMA ARRIVES AND SHE DECIDED TO BUY THE SELECTED CAKE".

            (SCENE CHANGES)
            (IN THE TIME OF BILL)
NARRATOR:- "THE SHOPKEEPER CALCULATES RS. 2700 INCLUDING  CAKE AND OTHER ACCESSORIES".
BUT GRADNMA DOESN'T HAVE ENOUGH MONEY TO PAY"
GRANDMA:-" I'M SORRY,CAN I RETURN THE CAKE PLEASE"?
SHOPKEEPER:- "SURE"!
THE SMALL GIRL :- "I WANT THE CAKE, I WON'T ASK FOR ANYTHING ELSE GRANDMA SO PLEASE".
GRANDMA:- NEXT TIME OKAY, WHEN WE CAN AFFORD IT.
SMALL GIRL:- LAST TIME YOU SAID THE SAME.
NARRATOR:-"THE GIRL FEELS VERY REGRETFUL AND WALKS AWAY"!
                (BOTH OF THEM LEFT THE SHOP)
NARRATOR:- THEN THERE COMES A KIND HEARTED MAN,HE WAS VERY SIMPLE AND CAME WITH THE INTENTION TO HELP THEM.
THE KIND MAN SAID TO THE SHOPKEEPER:- THEY DON'T WANT THAT?(INDICATING THE CAKE) I'LL TAKE IT THEN.

                    (SCENE CHANGES)
NARRATOR:- THE KIND MAN STARTED FOLLOWING THEM AND FINALLY THEY MET. 

THE MAN:- HEY!HEY!HELLO! THIS IS FOR YOU.(THE CAKE)

GRANDMA:- NO WE CAN'T ACCEPT THIS!

THE KIND MAN:-"WOULD YOU PLEASE"?

GRANDMA:- THERE'S NO REASON FOR YOU TO BUY THE CAKE FOR US.

THE KIND MAN:-WELL WHEN I WAS SEVEN.......

NARRATOR:- THE MAN STARTING ELABORATING A INCIDENT HAPPENED TO HIM IN THE PAST( WHEN HE WAS 7)

        (SCENE CHANGES)(THE CHILDHOOD OF THE MAN)
(IN THE CAKE SHOP)(HERE "A SMALL BOY REFERS TO THE KIND MAN)
 
A SMALL BOY :- MUMMY I WANT THIS ONE!
THE MAN:- "BY THE COUNTER WE DIDNT HAVE ENOUGH MONEY"
HIS MOTHER:- CAN WE GET SOMETHING ELSE?
THE SMALL BOY:-  BUT ITS MY B'DAY TODAY,CANT I CHOOSE MY OWN CAKE FOR IT?
HIS MOTHER :- I'M SORRY
 
THE KIND MAN:- THEN THERE COMES A STRANGER ,WHOM I'VE NEVER MET BEFORE.

THE STRANGER:- HERE HAVE THE CAKE AND A "HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU".

THE KIND MAN :- I DIDN'T KNOW KNOW HIS NAME AND I NEVER GOT A CHANCE TO SAY HIM "THANK YOU".
  


           (PRESENT TIME)
THE MAN:- I'LL NEVE FORGET ABOUT HIM. THE MAN IN THE QUEUE. 
GRANDMA:- THANK YOU! 
THE MAN:- NO, THANK YOU!
NARRATOR:- AND SHE HAVE ACCEPT THE CAKE.
(THE SMALL GIRL BECAME HAPPY)
GRANDMA:-  CAN I HAVE YOUR CONTACT NUMBER? LEMME REPAY YOU, WHEN WE HAVE THE MONEY.

   NARRATOR   :-  GRANDMA GIVES A PIECE OF PAPER TO THE MAN AND HE WROTE SOMETHING ON IT INSTED OF HIS NUMBER
THEN THE MAN SAID TO THE GIRL.

THE MAN:- PROMISE ME SOMETHING, THAT SOMEDAY, WHEN YOU WOULD BE ABLE TO HELP SOMEBODY, YOU'LL DO IT.

NARRATOR:- AND THEN HE HANDED THE NOTE TO THE GIRL.
GRANDMA :-MAY I'VE YOUR NUMBER MISTER.
THE MAN:- " I'M THE MAN IN THE QUEUE"
  
        (SCENE CHANGES)(TO THIER HOME)


THE GIRL:- I'VE CHOSEN THIS CAKE FOR YOU FOR YOUR BIRTHDAY
GRANDPA:- WOW !THIS IS MY FAVOURITE. THANK YOU!
THE GIRL:- WOOPS! I FORGOT TO PUT UP THE CANDELS , GIMME A SEC. TO PUT THEM.

  NARRATOR:-  THE GIRL WENT INTO THE KITCHEN

GRANDPA:- YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE SPENT THE MONEY!
GRANDMA:- ACTUALLY! A KIND MAN PAID FOR IT.

NARRATOR:- THE GIRL ARRIVES AND SIAD


  THE SMALL GIRL :-HE GAVE ME THIS NOTE

                      (SCENE CHANGES)
 NARRATOR:- THIS SCENE IS FROM THE PART OF THE STRANGERS PAST WHEN HE WAS 7.THE SAME SCINARO WAS ALSO DEVELOPED IN THE PAST OF THE KIND MAN.

  

 HER MOTHER:- PLEASE WRITE YOUR ADRESS ON IT (GIVING A PIECE OF PAPER TO THE MAN WHO BOUGHT THEM THE CAKE)
I'LL BRING THE MONEY BACK LATER!

THE KIND MAN WROTE SOMETHING ON THE  PIECE OF PAPER AND HANDED IT TO SMALL 7 YEARS OLD BOY 
 
NARRATOR:- THE STRANGER WHO HELPED THE KIND MAN WAS THE GRANDPA, WHO GOT HELPED BY THE SMALL BOY.
                               
 
                 (PRESENT SCENE) 
NARRATOR:- THE WORDS WRITTEN IN THE NOTES WERE:- 
GRANDPA:- "A SIMPLE ACT OF CARING CREATES AN ENDLESS RIPPLE"...
 
               ( SCENE CHAGES TO PAST)
THE KIND MAN:- "THAT COMES BACK TO YOU. 

"AN ACT OF KINDNESS CAN MAKE SOMEONE'S DAY FOR HIM,IT LASTS FOR LIFETIME. THIS STORY IS ABOUT A MAN WHO WANTS TO PAY TRIBUTE TO STRANGER'S GOOD DEED THEN MOVED HIM DECADES AGO"



-KAVYA GUPTA


              














Comments

  1. Bharat Seth20 January 2021 at 23:52

    Awesome bro, I got goosebumps 👌👌 it was special story, with the meaning that everything comes back to you ❤️💕

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  2. Unknown22 January 2021 at 19:52

    It's good 👍

    ReplyDelete
  3. Unknown23 January 2021 at 20:48

    Something new

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