THE MYSTERIOUS JUNGLE PART: 1
There was a small town in which 4 friends lived all of them were very adventurous they used to record all the abnormal activites happening in their life. One day while roaming in their village they came to know that there is a pathway in which no one dare
to pass on because the way was very scary and abnormal activites used to happen there, but the children decided to travel, they didn't realise that this type of thing can be happen but instead they went on,"Oohh the jungle looks very scary"one of the friend said"leave such illustration, nothing is there in this world no god, no ghost,"the leader replied, he was very confident and they all went while traveling three of them were shivering while one was looking excited, as they went on and on the came a sound of laughing"hhheeeeeee!!!!!hmm!!"who is doing this freaking things "the leader said ;"no boss no one has done this I believed that this was a ghost"Again you started"leader said. After a while a small girl came and told"wanna play with me"oooohhh what r you doing here mini"all of boys said in frighten , suddenly she disappeared when one of the boy went in the woods to search the came a huge scream"Aaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!! Leave me"and we started running in hurry and never found him anymore the leader was little scared and the other two started crying the leader said"leave this he was useless and gone we will find him when we'll return"and all of them started walking suddenly a group of wild pigs came and dived the two friends from the leader and the leader was seeing them and when something went in his eyes the boys disappeared"now I'll not be quite"he ran into the bushy side where he found the footsteps and he found one of his friend lying in the ground"wake up it's not the time for sleep"wake wake"cried the leader"go and save him"three lying boy said and died by setting this the leader picked up a stick and ran straight he found a creepy creature going to eat his friend , the leader the a stone and it strikes in to the head of creature"ggggrrrrrr who is disturbing me"the creature said,"you freakin creature leave my friend alone"the leader said and he started beating him with his stick as the creature asks him with the sharpy and rotten teeth and bit him "!!Aahhhh!!!!!"screamed the leader, the other boy came and hit the creature and both of them jumped while the creature was unconscious"ran ran ran!!!!"he shouted and both of them ran the creature woke up and started following them as they stroll out of the jungle he stop and they had a relief one hand of the leader was cut and his friend also died....TO BE CONTINUED
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best story waiting for another part
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ReplyDeleteVery well tried and very nice
ReplyDeleteFantestic effort. You have a great future ahead, keep going. We are egarly waiting for the next part.
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